Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Revisions and Editing of Policy/Proposal Paper

Paper Thesis: Although Occupy participants around the country have the right to demonstrate on public property, they must also do so in accordance to State laws and regulations. The "Occupy Wall Street" movement has broken legal boundaries in the past months, and this is also true with the Occupy Columbia group.

Concerns for the reviser-> My topic requires much research and information such as state laws and regulations, and these were hard to come by. My only real concern for this paper is if I have adamant evidence for my argument.

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