1. Between Thursday and today, I was able to edit some grammatical mistakes and ensure the cohesiveness of the essay through further analysis of my essay's structure. The strongest element of my paper is probably the evidence I provide, as well as my clear cut explanation of each view on the issue. I am concerned about whether I provided too much detail instead of making a clear argument, however, this type of essay is new to me and I believe I adhered to the assignment as best as I could.
2. For my fourth essay, I plan to probably write a Policy paper arguing for the inadequacy of the Wall Street Protesters' conduct, as well as for a change in laws regarding the ability of people to protest. I think that I have done plenty of research and have adecuate research for the new essay. I might want to look back through the news to see if there have been any new developments in the area.
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